Your love
Is a wet towel pressed hard against my face
As I struggle to breathe in and out
My lungs imploding
Your embrace
Bundles me firmly with velvet, tying me down
Your hands tighten around my throat
My voice silenced to whispering
Your heart
Beats in sync with your fists against my soul
As red, black and blue stain my expression
Shame drowns out all feeling
Your passion
Engulfs me with coldness that washes away
The urgency, that build up to ecstasy
And leaves me hanging
Gently, tenderly, as you did all your lovers
Your eyes read of wonder and pain
Mirroring mine
photo from here
14 comments:
I have always felt awed in the presence of people who write poetry. Kahanga-hanga.
Prose is hard enough for me as it is. I'm afraid I can't even compose nor write a poem even if my life depended on it. I'm such a moron.
I do sense some pain in what you wrote.
ang lalim!di ko maarok!haha
We learn to love the pain,
For in pain we feel love---
and loved, in the strangest ways
Painful and yet pleasurable
That kind of love which cuts deep inside our chest
Thirsting for beating apart from its own heartbeats.
hopefully this is not from experience...
i like the mirroring part though, i must say.
Ahhh...allegory! I hope you are okay...hugs!
*Hugs* Sean. Good vibes!
ohhh carino-brutal (the other kind that is)
*had a sudden feeling of asphyxia*
kaloka. pero kung ganyan din naman ka-hot, okay lang masakal at kung anu anu pah. wahaha :D
nowsblid lang.... kaloka!!!!
akala ko song ni rihanna at britney spears. :) pero pareho din naman ng tema. karinyo brutal. hehe :P
internal bleeding ang resulta! LOL
Nice piece u have here Sean! :D
kasi naman kasi... kahit masakit at galos at pasa na pinapadura pa.. hehehe
haha I see someone's been exploring the fine line between pleasure and pain. :p
@^travis: aww, thanks trav. nag-aattempt lang.
@mac callister: hahaha!
@ryan: wow! that is so beautiful!
@kiks: hi sis. are you still in manila?
@mr. g: thanks mr. g
@juan der last: thanks juan.
@orally: hahaha!
@the green breaker: oo nga wahahaha!
@eg: hahaha!
@=joshy=: actually i was playing the song din while writing this haha!
@mr. chan: lol! thanks mr. chan.
@kikomaxxx: haha! lamog na ba?
@citybuoy: hahaha! hi nyl!
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